correction pack 2

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou003.vtt

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ It’s not a good thing, nor a bad thing.
 It’s normal that there are different kinds of people.
 
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-That’s why you can just ignore rather you should be proud of your uniqueness I think!
+That's why you can be proud of what makes you unique!
 
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 Be proud of it?

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou008.vtt

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Can you forgive me?
 ...thank you.
 
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-So I thought we could work with this today. Can we talk about this?
+So I thought we could talk about what we see on these pictures today.
 
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 They had that at the last hospital.
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ That's some kind of test, isn't it?
 Amazing Lain! Do you know about it?
 
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-They call this a Rorschach Test.
+They call this a Rorschach test.
 
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 This isn’t really a test.

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou011.vtt

@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@ What would you like?
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 Don’t be shy.
 
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+00:24.740 --> 00:25.300
-I want to talk.
+I wanna do it.
 
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+00:25.660 --> 00:34.960
 You don’t have to force yourself. That might make you feel even worse. Take my word for it.
 
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@@ -63,13 +63,13 @@ I’m not sick?
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 Right now, I’m not completely sure, but you’re probably just fine.
 
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+01:15.850 --> 01:19.560
 Even if you are sick, I’ll make sure that you are cured.
 
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+01:19.870 --> 01:21.080
 You’re absolutely sure you can cure me?
 
-01:20.890 --> 01:23.840
+01:21.080 --> 01:23.840
 Absolutely. I will not let you be sick.
 
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src/static/media/webvtt/Cou012.vtt

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
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-What bothers me is that I have nightmares, I see strange things, I feel that someone is touching me when no one is there.
+By "what's bothering me", you mean... my nightmares? Me seeing strange things? Feeling like someone is touching me when no one is there?
 
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-I have symptoms of schizophrenia.
+Aren't those symptoms of schizophrenia?
 
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 Schizophrenia? Where did you hear a word like that? Who said that to you?
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ I looked it up in a book.
 Lain, it’s a good things to study hard, but it’s dangerous to go digging around and diagnosing yourself when you aren’t sick.
 
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-Have you heard the expression "a lot of how sick you feel depends on what you think about it?"
+Have you heard the expression "Sickness and health starts with the mind?"
 
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-Actually I haven’t.
+Actually, I haven’t.
 
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 Oh?
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Oh?
 Anyway, if you start diagnosing yourself, you’re going to start believing that you have all sorts of things wrong with you.
 
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-But I wanted to know what’s wrong with me. I wanted to understand.
+I just wanted to know... what's going on with me.
 
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 I see.
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ I think you’re intentions are right.
 But I’d like to ask something of you.
 
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-Please don’t go around imagining and concocting... searching, for things that you think are wrong with you.
+Please don’t go around prying… investigating, for things that you think are wrong with you.
 
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 Can I ask that of you?
@@ -82,28 +82,28 @@ I’m an only child, and I always wished I had a younger sister—someone like y
 You’re my big sister then?
 
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-I’d be happy if you saw it that way.
+I’d be happy if you saw me that way.
 
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 I will.
 
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-Thank you. Anyway, let’s end for today. You’re tired aren’t you?
+Thank you. Anyway, let’s end for today. You’re tired, aren’t you?
 
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-Uh, uh. But I’ll do what you asked me to do, Sensei.
+Not at all! But I’ll do what you asked me to do, Sensei.
 
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-Great! Hee, hee. Actually, I’m the one who’s tired.
+Now that's the spirit! ...Oh dear. Looks like I'm the one who's tired here after all.
 
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 You’re tired of me?
 
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-No, no! I don’t think that.
+Not at all!
 
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-I’ve had a lot of other work to do today, too.
+I’ve just had a lot of other work to do today.
 
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 I like you and I’ll miss you until we meet again, Lain.
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ That makes me feel better.
 Let’s end now, then. It’s getting late and we don’t want your mother to worry.
 
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-Goodbye, Touko Sensei.
+Goodbye, Touko-sensei.
 
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 Goodbye, Lain-chan.

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou016.vtt

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ I see.
 That’s probably because you are a strong person.
 
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-I think I was probably weak, and that I was trying to run away because of it.
+I was a weak person, and now it feels like back then, I was running away from the fact by thinking that.
 
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 Do you think I’m trying to run away from myself?
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Accept?
 Right.
 
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-I mean facing the "you" that you don’t want to meet or hear, and then trying to become friends with them.
+I mean facing the voices you don't want to hear or the "you" that you don't wanna meet, and then trying to become friends with them.
 
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 I can’t.

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou019.vtt

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ I write in my diary everyday. Sometimes I don’t have much to write, though.
 Don’t worry about it.
 
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-If you force yourself you’ll just want to give up.
+If you force yourself, you’ll just want to give up.
 
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 I don't know how many diaries I've had that I couldn't stick to for long.
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Your eyesight is really even better than that, isn’t it?
 But I wanted to have the same score as all the other kids.
 
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-Well there’s no point to having the examination then.
+Well, there’s no point having the examination, then.
 
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 At the last hospital you used to go to, they examined your eyes, too.
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ They had a machine that measures eyesight automatically.
 The machine only measures as far as three-point-zero, and your score was three-point-zero.
 
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-There are some kids with extremely good eyesight.
+Kids with such good eyesight are extremely rare, so...
 
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 The doctor in charge of your eye-exam spoke with a cancer specialist, who said he saw no problems.
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ Why don’t we just keep this as a secret?
 A secret?
 
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-Um hm. It will be our secret until you aren’t worried about it anymore.
+Uh huh. It will be our secret until you aren’t worried about it anymore.
 
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 Is that okay?

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou022.vtt

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ WEBVTT
 Am I sick because I came to the hospital?
 
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-Well, you can carry on with your life, but you’re troubled, aren’t you Lain?
+Well, you can carry on with your life, but you’re troubled, aren’t you, Lain?
 
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 It’s the job of a counselor to help with that.
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ They’re similar in the sense that they have the same goals.
 But the difference is that as a counselor I care for patients differently than I do as a doctor, and that each job has different qualifications.
 
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-Each job has its strengths and weaknesses, and I think it’s best when I can make their strengths compliment each other.
+Each job has its strengths and weaknesses, and I think it’s best when I can make their strengths complement each other.
 
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 That’s why I’m a doctor and a counselor.
@@ -40,13 +40,13 @@ Are you a doctor or a counselor when you see me?
 I’m a counselor. I think it’s better for me to be a counselor when I see you.
 
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-I’m not mentally ill? You said that the things I see are hallucinations.
+But am I not mentally ill? You said that the things I see are hallucinations.
 
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 It’s true that hallucinations and delusions are symptoms of mental illness, and this is just my hunch, but you don’t seem to be mentally ill to me.
 
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-Do I pay too much attention to things?
+Do I mind things too much?
 
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 Yes, I think that’s probably right.

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou035.vtt

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Do you feel it’s real or kind of ordinary?
 Well, it could be... or could not be... I don’t know... maybe not...
 
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-Is it nebular? Or you just can’t comprehend...
+Is it nebulous? Or you just can’t comprehend...
 
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 I just feel something is different.
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ I just feel something is different.
 Even though I recognize that I am playing in my house, I feel like it isn’t my house.
 
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-And even though I don’t know where it is, when I play at a park that I’ve never seen, for me it seems like the place I usually use.
+And even though I don’t know where it is, when I play at a park that I’ve never seen, for me it seems like the place I usually go.
 
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 Strange... Do you feel comfortable or uneasy when you are there?
@@ -49,10 +49,10 @@ Strange... Do you feel comfortable or uneasy when you are there?
 I don’t know, but Lain was laughing when it happened.
 
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-Not yourself but Lain?
+Not yourself, but Lain?
 
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-I can’t explain very well but it was Lain
+I can’t explain very well, but it was Lain.
 
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 Where were you at that time?

src/static/media/webvtt/Cou038.vtt

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 WEBVTT
 
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-When you get sick in the head, your head is really sick?
+When you get sick in the head, is your head really sick?
 
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 The brain isn’t the only part of the body involved in mental illness, but it is very important.

src/static/media/webvtt/Eda001.vtt

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ WEBVTT
 February 7th. Interview for testimony from a witness to the suicide of a high school girl.
 
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-Before we begin with questions, I’d like to confirm your identity.
+Before we begin questioning, I’d like to confirm your identity.
 
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-Shinji Makino 29 years old.
+Shinji Makino, 29 years old.
 
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 Office worker.
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Office worker.
 Is that correct?
 
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-Could you remind me of your address?
+Could you state your address?
 
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 Sure. Shinagawa ward, Kamiosaki, 30-19-105, Meguro-residence 504.

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda011.vtt

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Living in America was good, but I feel at ease being back home.
 I’m a bit scared, though.
 
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-When you come home after being away for so long, you start to feel conspicuous and out of place.
+When you come home after being away for so long, you start to feel out of place.
 
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 I remember being insecure in junior high school, too.
@@ -40,13 +40,13 @@ But you worked really hard, didn't you, Touko?
 Study, study, study.
 
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-But I made good friends, and there were good and bad times too.
+I made good friends, and there were good times and bad times, too.
 
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-I had a romance that didn’t work out, but I had a romance that worked out well, too.
+I had a romance that didn’t work out, but I had another romance that worked out well.
 
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-Looking back, I wonder what part of me changed the most.
+Looking back, I wonder what about me changed the most.
 
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 Hee, hee.

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda030.vtt

@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ Argh!
 I haven’t written in my diary for days.
 
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-I’m not entirely slothful about it, but what’s the point of keeping a diary if I don’t write in it everyday?
+I’m not just being lazy, but what’s the point of keeping a diary if I don’t write in it everyday?
 
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 Things should be easier for me this week because Professor Takashima will be away.
 
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-I want to go do some shopping!
+I want to go shopping!
 
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 I need to buy a present for Harumi, too.
@@ -22,4 +22,4 @@ I need to buy a present for Harumi, too.
 I wonder if Takeshi-san will go with me.
 
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-He’ll won’t mind doing a little shopping with me, will he?
+He wouldn't mind doing a little shopping together, would he?

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda031.vtt

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 WEBVTT
 
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-I became emotional at Harumi’s wedding.
+I got all choked up at Harumi's wedding.
 
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 I’ve never seen her look so pretty.
@@ -13,22 +13,22 @@ She said she was going on her honeymoon to have a baby right away.
 I’m glad that she seemed so happy.
 
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-I love to see wedding dresses.
+I love wedding dresses.
 
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 Weddings in churches are so romantic.
 
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-There were over 100 invited people attending the reception.
+Over 100 people attended the reception.
 
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-I’ve never been to such a large wedding crowd.
+I’ve never been to such a large wedding before.
 
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 Oh, when will I be as happy as Harumi?
 
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-It was unfortunate that although there were many people at the wedding who knew each other, there weren’t many people for me to talk to.
+It was a shame that, although there were many people at the wedding who knew each other, there weren’t many people for me to talk to.
 
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 And Takeshi-san couldn’t come.
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ And Takeshi-san couldn’t come.
 Kanoko couldn’t, either.
 
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-I know that people living in a society like this have a lot of things they have to do, but I feel that they should make time to go to their friend’s wedding.
+I know that people living in a society like this have a lots of things they need to do, but I wish they'd make time to go to their friend’s wedding.
 
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 Ah, well.

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda032.vtt

@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@ WEBVTT
 Today I met with Kanako for the first time in 5 years.
 
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-She didn’t seem different at all.
+She's hardly changed at all.
 
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-She’s quite a career woman.
+She’s quite the career woman.
 
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-But she does seem a bit relaxed compared to 5 years ago.
+But she has loosened up a bit in the last 5 years.
 
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-Let me leave it at that.
+I'll just leave it at that.
 
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 On the other hand, Kanako said that I’ve changed a lot.
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ She said that I used to be difficult to approach, but that I seem gentler now.
 Is that really true?
 
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-So she used to think that I was difficult and cold?
+So she used to think that I was cold and intimidating?
 
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 Grrr!

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda033.vtt

@@ -1,22 +1,22 @@
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+00:01.740 --> 00:05.700
-Kanako said that she though the freedom and liberation of American living had rubbed off on me.
+Kanako said that she thought the freedom and liberation of American living had rubbed off on me.
 
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 I was a bit embarrassed to hear that.
 
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-Looking at the postcard photo from Harumi’s honeymoon, I laughed.
+I giggled when I saw the postcard photo from Harumi’s honeymoon.
 
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-I’m jealous, though I pretend not to be.
+I try to hide it, but I’m jealous.
 
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 Kanako said that she still has no plans of getting married.
 
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-I hope that she doesn’t proclaim all of a sudden that she will get married, like Harumi did.
+I hope she doesn’t change her mind all of a sudden, like Harumi.
 
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 What will I do when Kanako gets married?

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda034.vtt

@@ -4,25 +4,25 @@ WEBVTT
 Oh, I’m so sick of all this work!
 
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-I really dislike Professor Takashima.
+I really hate Professor Takashima.
 
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 There are other researchers he could delegate to.
 
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-I’ve been irritable lately.
+I’ve been in a bad mood lately.
 
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-I haven’t been able to see Takeshi-san, there have been no new extensions of counseling work, and I’ve been doing menial chores.
+I haven’t been able to see Takeshi-san, there hasn't been any new counseling work, and I’ve just been doing menial chores.
 
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-All these things are putting me on edge.
+It's really putting me on edge.
 
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-Nothing seems to be going well.
+Nothing's going my way.
 
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-It’s no good if I become cranky.
+I can't be cranky.
 
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 I’m a counselor.
@@ -34,19 +34,19 @@ I’m sorry, Lain.
 I have to think of my work outside of counseling as part of my work, too.
 
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-I have to do what I have to do and have it recognized.
+I have to do what I have to do, and I want to be recognized.
 
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 Otherwise, I’ll fail.
 
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-Now that I think of it, Halloween will be coming soon.
+Come to think of it, it will be Halloween soon.
 
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-Back in America, people preparing for Halloween made everyday feel like a festival.
+Back in America, people getting ready for Halloween made every day feel like a festival.
 
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-Those were good days.
+Those were the good days.
 
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-I guess there won’t be Halloween or Christmas either this year.
+I guess this year there won’t be Halloween or Christmas, either.

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda035.vtt

@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@ WEBVTT
 Why do I have to do all these chores?
 
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-This has nothing to do with the Labor Standards Act.
+This is a violation of the Labor Standards Act!
 
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 Am I being bullied?
 
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-Is my Japanese strange because I’m drunk?
+Am I talking weird because I'm drunk?
 
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 Stupid!
@@ -25,4 +25,4 @@ Stupid!
 Damn it!
 
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-bald-headed Takashima bastard with the blinding shiny bald head!
+That bald bastard Takashima with the blinding shiny bald head!

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda036.vtt

@@ -1,25 +1,25 @@
 WEBVTT
 
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-I wonder how many times I’ve met with Lain up till now.
+I wonder how many times I’ve met with Lain so far.
 
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-It seems that she sometimes has hallucinations, but they don’t seem to be developing further.
+She sometimes struggles with hallucinations, but they don’t seem to be worsening.
 
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-I think that seeing hallucinations must be a very difficult thing for her.
+Seeing hallucinations must be a very difficult thing for her.
 
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-She’s not the kind of child that should have a gloomy personality.
+She's not the kind of kid that should be gloomy.
 
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-I wonder if she is getting a hard time at school.
+I wonder if she's having a hard time at school.
 
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 Her mother told me that she isn’t being bullied.
 
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-When I mention school, Lain tends to become quiet.
+When I mention school, Lain tends to go quiet.
 
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 Maybe I should ask some of her friends at school how she’s doing.
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ I wish I could help you, Lain.
 I feel depressed when I see Lain.
 
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-It can’t be helped when I get depressed, but it’s just at those times that Professor Takashima complains to me about trifling matters.
+I can't help feeling depressed, but it’s when I get that way that Professor Takashima always complains to me about stupid stuff.
 
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 Ahh!
@@ -43,4 +43,4 @@ Ahh!
 Tomorrow I have the day off.
 
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-I’ll go on the town and relax.
+I’ll go out on the town and have a good time.

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda037.vtt

@@ -1,25 +1,25 @@
 WEBVTT
 
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-Lately, Takeshi-san has been acting strangely.
+Lately, Takeshi-san has been acting weird.
 
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 When I call, he always says that he’s busy.
 
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-I understand if he’s busy with work, but I wish he weren’t so cold with me.
+I understand if he’s busy with work, but I wish he wasn't so cold with me.
 
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-And why did he decide not to see me on my birthday?
+And why didn't he come to see me on my birthday?
 
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-I’d hate to say, "is your work more important than me?" but I’m starting to want to say it.
+I’d hate to say, "is your work more important than me?" but I’m starting to feel that way.
 
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 I’m 27 years old, Takeshi-san.
 
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-You were very happy with me when I passed my examination.
+You were so happy when I passed my exam.
 
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 Lately I don’t even see you at the research lab.
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Lately I don’t even see you at the research lab.
 It worries me.
 
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-I hope it’s all my imagination.
+I hope it’s just my imagination.
 
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 Things seem to be getting gloomy for me.
@@ -40,4 +40,4 @@ Things haven’t been going very well.
 I’m going to bed.
 
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-The more I think about this stuff, the more uneasy I get.
+The more I think about this stuff, the more anxious I get.

src/static/media/webvtt/Tda038.vtt

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ WEBVTT
 Lain gave me a present.
 
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-It was a combination present for my birthday and for Valentine’s Day coming up.
+It was for my birthday and also for Valentine’s Day coming up.
 
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 She gave me cookies to go with my tea.
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ She gave me cookies to go with my tea.
 She said that she made the cookies with her mother because she knew that I like something with my tea.
 
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-I was very moved by her.
+What are you doing getting so emotional over a client, Touko?
 
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 What are you doing getting so moved by a client, Touko?